Writing Issues for History Majors

I. Basic Issues
    A. Grammar (Below are the three most common problems I encounter; make sure you avoid them.)
               1. Run-on sentences
            2. Sentence fragments/comma splices
            3. Odd capitalizations
    B. Avoid using slang or colloquialisms
    C. Always proofread your paper!!!!

II. Basic expression (how you communicate your ideas)
    A. Avoid being vague; precision is essential; give specific examples.
    B. Awkward passages--take the time to rewrite and smooth out bumpy sections where you ineloquently express certain ideas.
    C. Problem of "overwriting"--Eschew obfuscation (be direct!)
            1. Word choice--keep it simple
            2. Decode complicated concepts

III. Argumentation--Ask yourself these questions as you write and rewrite your paper.
    A. Do you have a clear point or thesis? (Pick a title for the essay)
    B. Do you use evidence persuasively to support your thesis? (Avoid long quotes)
    C. Do you have effective transitions between paragraphs?

IV. Further Issues
    A. Proofread, Proofread, Proofread!
    B. Paragraphs are more than one sentence!
    C. Work at greater depth--be specific, give concrete examples, always back up a generality with evidence


There are resouces here at the university to help you work through writing issues.  Writing effectively is NOT easy and demands sustained effort and practice.  
The University Reading and Writing Center is one place to turn for assistance.
Another resource available at UF is the Dial Center for Written and Oral Communication.