What’s wrong with these sentences?

A.  These crooks would attack any vessel with the hopes of obtaining any goods or documents of value to them, no matter how detrimental it’s overall effect would have on society as a whole.

B. Without a form of police for pirates, these villains could raid merchant ships filled with riches at their leisure.

C. This is becoming more obvious to me of how the Atlantic Exchange became the building block of the America’s or sort of like a blueprint for what would become a vast explosion of trading.

D.  He [Las Casas] says these ‘heathens’ were merely living in peace with their families when they are forced into Christianity and slavery, losing all of their possessions and even their wives and children.

E.  Gold in the world of the Spanish and the so-called Old World was a commodity that was highly sought after by the cultures in which the Spanish had dealings with.

F.  Where as gold in the Spanish view of their place in the world was very important, it help defend their territory, feed their people, and the more they had the more influenced they had on the cultures around them.

G.  This description being mainly accurate as plants and animals flourish in the equatorial region, however much of the remaining land would prove to be hostile to Europeans, and would take considerable efforts to harness the potential.

H.  He does however; give thanks to the king and to God.  As admiral of the expedition it is only natural that the authoritative account be composed by Columbus and we see his tone and attitude, indeed he goes so far as to place the whole of the world in his debt.

I.  He does, however, give thanks to the king and to God.  As admiral of the expedition, Columbus saw himself as writing the authoritative account of the voyage; the fact that he placed the whole world in his debt indicates his confident tone and attitude.

J.  The lack of cultural surrounding from his homeland, such as other people from his region, was a major factor in the deterioration of his cultural roots.

K.  All of this, however, was done in the name of Christianity.  It was the underlying tone that was used in all of these ventures.

L.  The Europeans had a definite affect on the culture of the Indians that they encountered.

M.  Menendez explains that they must surrender there arms or be put to death.  A French sergeant returns and offers to surrender if they’re lives are spared.

N.  The two men of the clergy throughout this letter make the case that if the Crown and the Church, protected the Indians from the encomienda system and at the same time treated them the same way Spanish subjects were treated, that the quality of their loyalty would be quite significant.

O.  In fear for his life, James Albert put his arms around the captain of the Dutch Ship, begging him to save him from certain death if he was not sold.

P.  He could not decide whether the Natives were good and needed Christianity or if they were savages, either way, what Cabeza de Vaca did was to emphasis the “Noble Savage” concept that was already shown in Columbus’ journal.

Q.  It would be virtually impossible to say that Cabeza de Vaca viewed the Indians or the New World without preconceptions or bias.  It is imperative to me to understand the biases that exist from the author to know how to analyze his work.

R.  When they found him, he was dressed in Indian garb and barely remembered the language that he had been raised in.